One of my best friends and I thought it would be cool to write our own soap (it's more of a hobby, but..) and we brainstormed ideas, and I finally got around to writing two scripts!
Here they are, and let me know what you think!! All opinions/comments are appreciated!!
Decisions,Decisions
Jeffrey and Lauren's Wedding
Christine was sitting in the pew in the church alone, thinking. Well, she wasnt alone really, she had Matt, her best friend next to her, but inside, she felt alone. She felt like she will always be alone in the inside without Jeffrey, but today, she had to watch him get married. It was eating her up inside. It wasnt only the fact that he was getting married that made her upset, but it was the bitch he was marrying. She was a lying, cheating, skank, and she knew she had to tell Jeffrey. A part of her so badly wanted to, but the other part knew how much Jeffrey really loved Lauren, or the Wicked Witch of the West, as she preferred to call her. So she talked to the next best thing- Jeffreys twin brother, and her best friend, Matt. Matt was also in a fix, he loves his brother, and he knows how much he loves Lauren with his whole heart, but how do you tell someone that the person you love the most, really isnt worth it?
Christine ran thoughts through her head, on how she should tell him, should she tell him in private, or have Lauren in the room and really embarrass her? But it looks like she wont have that chance, because now they are getting married.
The wedding music started playing, and everyone got up to stand for the bride, but all Christine wanted to do was run away, or wake up and realize its all a dream, but then Matt tugged at her to get up.
Matt: I know its hard for you to be here for Lauren and Jeffreys wedding, in fact, I admire you for being here today, but come on, stand up.
Christine: (sighs) Okay.
Christine got one look at Lauren, and envied her. That should be me she thought, Im the only one who truly loves Jeffrey. But does she really? How can she even say she loves him when she cant tell him the truth about Lauren?
Her thoughts were interrupted when she saw Lauren at the alter, looking all happy and giddy, meanwhile behind that innocent smile, is a guilty woman.
Christine: (whispers to Matt) I cant take it anymore, he has to know now before its too late.
Matt: No, wait.
But it was too late, Christine stood up and all eyes were on her, including Jeffreys. Well for once hes looking at me. She said to herself.
Lauren: Well?
Christine: Jeffrey you have to know. She starts getting out of the pew.
Matt: Christine this isnt the place.
Christine: He has to know before its too late.
Matt gave up trying to stop her; he knows that once she sets her mind on something, she goes through with it. Thats one of the things he admires and loves about her.
Christine: Jeffrey..she doesnt really love you.
Jeffrey: What? No.No. thats a lie, you just have a weird obsession with me Well, forget it, I love Lauren, not you.
Matt: Let Christine explain.
Christine: Lauren.Lauren cheated on you with Michael.
Jeff: No..No thats not true.
Lauren: Thats absurd, I admit, I have a past with Michael, but thats it- hes in the past.
Christine: You know its true Lauren, dont deny it! I saw you two together!
Priest: Maybe you want to talk in private.
Lauren: No, thats not necessary Father, were going through with this wedding soon.
Christine: Like hell you are! You have the nerve to swear before God that you love Jeffrey with your whole heart and soul, while youre living a lie! Youre with Michael, I saw you!
Jeffrey: What do you mean, you saw them?
Christine: I was going to come by and visit you, to give you a gift on your birthday, I saw the lights on in the house, and the door was open, so I let myself in, and I saw them, having sex in the living room.
Lauren: You break in the house! What are you some kind of stalker?
Christine: Dont change the topic Lauren. You know what Im saying is true, you were with Michael, on Jeffreys birthday!
Jeffrey: Can I talk to you in private Christinenow.
Christine: Okay and they walked out of the church together. She thought to herself The next time I walk out of the church with Jeffrey like this, Ill be his bride.
Jeffrey: What the hell were you thinking in there, attacking Lauren like that?
Christine: Everything I said is true, Lauren cheated on you with Michael. I saw it myself, as disgusting as it was.
Jeffrey: Just stop it ok? I love Lauren and she loves me, and were getting married today!
Jeffrey starts to walk back but Christine stops him
Christine: If you do, youll be making a big mistake.
Jeffrey: Look, I know that you love me, and that you care about me, but Im in love with Lauren, and she loves me.
Christine: God! Would you stop saying that! Lauren doesnt love you, Im the only one who does, and the only one who ever will!
Christine pulls Jeffrey into a passionate kiss, and just at the same time as their precious moment happens; Lauren and Matt walk in and see them.
To Be Continued
Decisions,Decisions
Kyle and Michael - Shame or Guilt?
Kyle was staring up at his ceiling. He was going through his options.
I could jump out of my window, slit my wrists, pop some drugs, shoot myself, hang myself
Kyle had these weird, crazy, depressing thoughts because he was trying to escape from what he really is. Gay. Yes, Kyle is gay, and he has been having a hard time dealing with it. He was raised by a Catholic family and he knows that his family wont accept it. So what can he do? Lie to his family; make them believe that he is something they want him to be, instead of who he really is? Or does he tell them and be disowned for the rest of his life? Deep in his heart, he knew what he should do. He has to tell them. After all, one of the things he was taught was to express himself freely and never be afraid to say anything. But can they accept him? Will they still love him despite of what he is?
Kyle didnt like the thoughts he had running through his head.
Am I crazy? Is it normal to have these weird thoughts about wanting to die?
He knew what he should do.
I gotta call Michael, hell understand.
Michael is the only one that knows Kyle is gay. Michael is the one who gave Kyle the courage to come out, but only because he came out himself. Michael and Kyle have been dating for 2 years now. Seeing Kyle dating girls hurt him of course, but he knows why hes doing it. To let people think hes straight, hes putting up a front. Michael wants Kyle to come clean and tell his family. He wants Kyle to be able to live a free life. Keeping a secret like that can only hurt you. Its like you make yourself prisoner in your own skin. Michael didnt want to live a private life and meeting Kyle in private anymore, he wants to live freely, too.
Michaels phone rings
Michael: Hello.
Kyle: Hey Mike. Its good to hear your voice
Michael: I wish I could say the same for you. I mean, Im glad to hear you, but you sound scared Ky..whats wrong?
Kyle: II
Michael: What? Kyle, you ok?
Kyle: Can you come over to my place? As soon as you can..
Michael: Sure, but whats up? Give me something here, your scaring me..
Kyle: I thought about killing myself!! Its not normal to think that way, but I did. And Im scared man, you gotta help me
Michael: Ok, alright sure, Ill be right over..
Michael got into his car, and took the shortest and quickest route he knew to get to Kyles house. He was a little over the limit, but he didnt care. Thoughts of suicide came into his head at one point, too, before he came out. He knows how stronger and deeper those thoughts can go, and being close to doing it. The thought of Kyle killing himself made him sick. He cant lose the guy that means the world to him
Kyle looked at the gun that was in his desk drawer. He took it out and stared at it. He put his finger on the trigger and pointed the gun at his own head
Michael got out of his car, and ran to the door, he knocked and Kyles sister let him in, without saying a word, he ran right by her, and went up to Kyles room
Im sorry, MichaelRemember that Ill always love you Kyle said to himself, and then.he pulled the trigger.
Michael heard the gunshot from the hallway.
Oh my God. Kyle what did you do?
He walked up to Kyles door, afraid to open it, fearing what he might find inside. But he got up the courage to open the door
To Be Continued
So, what'd you think?
Here they are, and let me know what you think!! All opinions/comments are appreciated!!
Decisions,Decisions
Jeffrey and Lauren's Wedding
Christine was sitting in the pew in the church alone, thinking. Well, she wasnt alone really, she had Matt, her best friend next to her, but inside, she felt alone. She felt like she will always be alone in the inside without Jeffrey, but today, she had to watch him get married. It was eating her up inside. It wasnt only the fact that he was getting married that made her upset, but it was the bitch he was marrying. She was a lying, cheating, skank, and she knew she had to tell Jeffrey. A part of her so badly wanted to, but the other part knew how much Jeffrey really loved Lauren, or the Wicked Witch of the West, as she preferred to call her. So she talked to the next best thing- Jeffreys twin brother, and her best friend, Matt. Matt was also in a fix, he loves his brother, and he knows how much he loves Lauren with his whole heart, but how do you tell someone that the person you love the most, really isnt worth it?
Christine ran thoughts through her head, on how she should tell him, should she tell him in private, or have Lauren in the room and really embarrass her? But it looks like she wont have that chance, because now they are getting married.
The wedding music started playing, and everyone got up to stand for the bride, but all Christine wanted to do was run away, or wake up and realize its all a dream, but then Matt tugged at her to get up.
Matt: I know its hard for you to be here for Lauren and Jeffreys wedding, in fact, I admire you for being here today, but come on, stand up.
Christine: (sighs) Okay.
Christine got one look at Lauren, and envied her. That should be me she thought, Im the only one who truly loves Jeffrey. But does she really? How can she even say she loves him when she cant tell him the truth about Lauren?
Her thoughts were interrupted when she saw Lauren at the alter, looking all happy and giddy, meanwhile behind that innocent smile, is a guilty woman.
Christine: (whispers to Matt) I cant take it anymore, he has to know now before its too late.
Matt: No, wait.
But it was too late, Christine stood up and all eyes were on her, including Jeffreys. Well for once hes looking at me. She said to herself.
Lauren: Well?
Christine: Jeffrey you have to know. She starts getting out of the pew.
Matt: Christine this isnt the place.
Christine: He has to know before its too late.
Matt gave up trying to stop her; he knows that once she sets her mind on something, she goes through with it. Thats one of the things he admires and loves about her.
Christine: Jeffrey..she doesnt really love you.
Jeffrey: What? No.No. thats a lie, you just have a weird obsession with me Well, forget it, I love Lauren, not you.
Matt: Let Christine explain.
Christine: Lauren.Lauren cheated on you with Michael.
Jeff: No..No thats not true.
Lauren: Thats absurd, I admit, I have a past with Michael, but thats it- hes in the past.
Christine: You know its true Lauren, dont deny it! I saw you two together!
Priest: Maybe you want to talk in private.
Lauren: No, thats not necessary Father, were going through with this wedding soon.
Christine: Like hell you are! You have the nerve to swear before God that you love Jeffrey with your whole heart and soul, while youre living a lie! Youre with Michael, I saw you!
Jeffrey: What do you mean, you saw them?
Christine: I was going to come by and visit you, to give you a gift on your birthday, I saw the lights on in the house, and the door was open, so I let myself in, and I saw them, having sex in the living room.
Lauren: You break in the house! What are you some kind of stalker?
Christine: Dont change the topic Lauren. You know what Im saying is true, you were with Michael, on Jeffreys birthday!
Jeffrey: Can I talk to you in private Christinenow.
Christine: Okay and they walked out of the church together. She thought to herself The next time I walk out of the church with Jeffrey like this, Ill be his bride.
Jeffrey: What the hell were you thinking in there, attacking Lauren like that?
Christine: Everything I said is true, Lauren cheated on you with Michael. I saw it myself, as disgusting as it was.
Jeffrey: Just stop it ok? I love Lauren and she loves me, and were getting married today!
Jeffrey starts to walk back but Christine stops him
Christine: If you do, youll be making a big mistake.
Jeffrey: Look, I know that you love me, and that you care about me, but Im in love with Lauren, and she loves me.
Christine: God! Would you stop saying that! Lauren doesnt love you, Im the only one who does, and the only one who ever will!
Christine pulls Jeffrey into a passionate kiss, and just at the same time as their precious moment happens; Lauren and Matt walk in and see them.
To Be Continued
Decisions,Decisions
Kyle and Michael - Shame or Guilt?
Kyle was staring up at his ceiling. He was going through his options.
I could jump out of my window, slit my wrists, pop some drugs, shoot myself, hang myself
Kyle had these weird, crazy, depressing thoughts because he was trying to escape from what he really is. Gay. Yes, Kyle is gay, and he has been having a hard time dealing with it. He was raised by a Catholic family and he knows that his family wont accept it. So what can he do? Lie to his family; make them believe that he is something they want him to be, instead of who he really is? Or does he tell them and be disowned for the rest of his life? Deep in his heart, he knew what he should do. He has to tell them. After all, one of the things he was taught was to express himself freely and never be afraid to say anything. But can they accept him? Will they still love him despite of what he is?
Kyle didnt like the thoughts he had running through his head.
Am I crazy? Is it normal to have these weird thoughts about wanting to die?
He knew what he should do.
I gotta call Michael, hell understand.
Michael is the only one that knows Kyle is gay. Michael is the one who gave Kyle the courage to come out, but only because he came out himself. Michael and Kyle have been dating for 2 years now. Seeing Kyle dating girls hurt him of course, but he knows why hes doing it. To let people think hes straight, hes putting up a front. Michael wants Kyle to come clean and tell his family. He wants Kyle to be able to live a free life. Keeping a secret like that can only hurt you. Its like you make yourself prisoner in your own skin. Michael didnt want to live a private life and meeting Kyle in private anymore, he wants to live freely, too.
Michaels phone rings
Michael: Hello.
Kyle: Hey Mike. Its good to hear your voice
Michael: I wish I could say the same for you. I mean, Im glad to hear you, but you sound scared Ky..whats wrong?
Kyle: II
Michael: What? Kyle, you ok?
Kyle: Can you come over to my place? As soon as you can..
Michael: Sure, but whats up? Give me something here, your scaring me..
Kyle: I thought about killing myself!! Its not normal to think that way, but I did. And Im scared man, you gotta help me
Michael: Ok, alright sure, Ill be right over..
Michael got into his car, and took the shortest and quickest route he knew to get to Kyles house. He was a little over the limit, but he didnt care. Thoughts of suicide came into his head at one point, too, before he came out. He knows how stronger and deeper those thoughts can go, and being close to doing it. The thought of Kyle killing himself made him sick. He cant lose the guy that means the world to him
Kyle looked at the gun that was in his desk drawer. He took it out and stared at it. He put his finger on the trigger and pointed the gun at his own head
Michael got out of his car, and ran to the door, he knocked and Kyles sister let him in, without saying a word, he ran right by her, and went up to Kyles room
Im sorry, MichaelRemember that Ill always love you Kyle said to himself, and then.he pulled the trigger.
Michael heard the gunshot from the hallway.
Oh my God. Kyle what did you do?
He walked up to Kyles door, afraid to open it, fearing what he might find inside. But he got up the courage to open the door
To Be Continued
So, what'd you think?
