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huggiepoo |
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This is my new revised fanfic....same ideas .... different wording....hope you guys like it.
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huggiepoo |
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JR....CHANGE IN CUSTODY.....JENDALL...
JR looked at himself in the mirror of the courthouse men's restroom. It was the only place that he could've run to. He felt so trapped. A victim of his emotions...the only problem was that he did not know what he should be feeliing as of this moment. His life was so different...first he loses the little girl that he grew to love for the better part of a year....now he loses the son he never had....the son that wasn't his in the first place but his brother's. What does he do now, he asks himself? First things first....get the hell outta this place. He opens the door and quickly tries to escape, but is held back by the hand that has taken hold of his arm. 'Leave me alone!' he says, totally unaware a to the owner of said arm. He then hears a familiar voice. 'Hey...I'm not leaving you alone....not now'.....It was Kendall... [jr]'What are you doing here?' [kendall]'More like how'd I know where to find you?' JR smiled....he was wondering that himself, but at times it's hard to understand the kind of relationship they had. [jr]'Look.....Kendall,..I ...I....' She cut him off. .... [kendall]'You wanna get outta here rite?' JR looked at her completely mystified, and it would seem as if his face gave this impression...for...before he knew it....Kendall was escorting him out of the courthouse. They were in the car....she was driving....all JR could do was look, more like gaze out the window. A million things were running through his mind....how in the world was he supposed to regain control of his life? Before he knew it, the car stopped. [kendall] "come on...let's go" JR opened the door, but he did not see the Chandler mansion in front of him. He turned to Kendall. She seemed to know exactly what he was thinking for she said...."Hey, that unfriendly place you call home is the place you need right now. Besides, I have just the thing to cheer you up. THhis was the first time that JR acknowledged his location. He was at Kendall's, and for some reason, blindly following her. That's the way this relationship is, he thought to himself. He and Kendall were at her front door. She opened it, and motioned him to come in. He did and was shocked by what stood in front of him. It was Bianca.....in her arms she held Bess, no, not Bess....Miranda. ![]() |
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butch16502 |
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i like the rewrite - especially no Tad at the courthouse
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Wildchild453 |
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So Boobe got to keep A3?
Someone needs to hug JR. Update please ************************* "You see things and you say why? But I dream things that never were; and I say why not?" ~~George Bernard Shaw "There was no 'before' the beginning of our universe, because once upon a time there was no time." ~~John D. B |
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didi02 |
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Great start, more soon!
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huggiepoo |
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Thanks for all the nice comments. It means a lot to me. I promise I'll have some more soon lol. At least b4 jan 17
Seleena
GALA #19 ![]() http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a194/huggiepoo/me3.jpg |
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LuckyWhiteRose |
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ohhh I like it alot. More please
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huggiepoo |
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"I can't do this..." JR said, not being able to think straight. His emotions were too great, and all that he could do was look at that beautiful girl...the girl he grew to love as his own.
Kendall held his hand and looked into his teary eyes. "Hey, it's ok..I'm here with you. Noone blames you for anything. Bianca and you were both victims." "She's right JR," Bianca added. "In the end I got my daughter back and you ended up with nothing. I don't want that. You've loved my little girl ever since the day she was born and I can see how much she loves you. There's no way I would think of breaking that up. I want you to be a part of her...of our lives." "You mean that?" JR said, not raising his head to see whether her intentions were genuine or not. He knew he could trust her and Kendall, but it was still a lot of him to absorb. Kendall led to him to the couch and got him to sit down. Bianca gave him Miranda to hold. She instantly stretched out to him...it was so natural and it made JR happy. All of the day's sad and unfortunate events melted before this bundle of joy. Bianca looked over at them, smiling. SHe knew she had done the right thing. The look on both their faces was priceless. Even the look on Kendall's face was something. Before JR knew it, Bianca was taking Miranda away from him. It was already late and time for her to sleep. JR was a little stunned at first, but he was able to comprehend what was going on. Bianca took her into the next room, leaving him sitting next to Kendall. He turned to her and motioned to say 'thank you' but she shook her head before he could even get the words out. He smiled. There was something about Kendall...she knew what he was thinking. Sometimes that could get very annoying, but at this instant, he was grateful for it. He felt too emotional to be answering questions. She was so enlightening right now. He could not help but stare at her in amazement. She noticed it too.... "what?" she asked in surprise to his sudden attention "nothing.." he said, embarrassed that she caught onto him. "come on JR...tell me" "you know that you're amazing?" "oh JR...you don't have to tell me twice" He smiled...even chuckled a bit under his breath. "what's that I see?" Kendall asked..."Thank God!! I was really worried about you." "I was worried myself," JR replied. "I mean I'm not totally over all that has happened today, but I feel like I took a step in the right direction, and I have you to thank for that." "oh please...it was nothing. What are friends for huh?" JR suddenly realized that maybe he should get home. In a sense he was glad to, knowing that he might actually get some sleep.He hugged Kendall and left. He took one step at a time out the door and went back to the estate. Kendall looked at him leave. Bianca came back in smiled. "That was something special right there?"she said "what do you mean?..Seeing JR with Miranda?" "no...seeing JR with you...The two of you have something special. I see it, even Miranda sees it..." Kendall blushed, not sure how to respond to that statement. She knew that there was something ther between her and JR, but she wasn;t sure of what it was. Back at the mansion, JR put his head on his pillow. He carefully thought about all the events of the day. He just let his emotions flow. It felt good....What felt even better thou, was the fact that he didn't feel the need to cry. That was a big achievement today. He didn't have to think of why that was...it was Kendall. She was so supportive of him today. She made him feel better, much better. He was thankful for that then went to sleep. Seleena
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